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Desolate
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: desolate97
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Don't do anything that seems unrealistic, unfair or godly, just stick to what's right and be fair.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It can cause the roleplaying to collapse and can ruin someone else's experience and yours.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Desolate
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 28
Physical Description: Red eyes, fully black and shrouded apart from a rose on his back, he is 6ft tall, 11 stone and only has 1 outfit
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

The tent grows colder when the figure enters.

The candles sway though no wind touches them. Their light catches on a pair of eyes that glow faintly red in the dimness, like embers buried beneath ash.

The being does not immediately sit.

Instead it watches the old hag, unblinking.

“So,” it says at last, voice low and hollow, as if echoing from somewhere deeper than the tent itself, “the swamp whispers my arrival now.”

A faint, crooked smile touches its lips.

“I wondered who had the courage to wait.”

Slowly, it lowers itself onto the cushion. The fabric barely moves beneath it.

“My story…” The red glow in its eyes brightens slightly as it studies her face. “You speak as if it is a tale. As if it has an ending.”

A quiet, dry laugh slips from its throat.

“I walked into this town because something here remembers me. The rot. The water. The old things that refuse to die.”

It leans forward a little, candlelight flickering across its pale features.

“And you,” it continues softly, “looked at my face and said you’ve been expecting me.”

The red eyes narrow slightly.

“So tell me, old one…”

“What kind of ghost were you waiting for?”

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Powergaming/Metagaming
    • please define metagaming for me so I know you fully understand what it is, or provide an example of it.
  • Roleplay Sample
    • Your sample is coming back rather high on 3/4 of my AI detectors, please rewrite in your own words.
  • Skin/Character Description





 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @tarajess to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

  • Powergaming/Metagaming
    • please define metagaming for me so I know you fully understand what it is, or provide an example of it.
  • Roleplay Sample
    • Your sample is coming back rather high on 3/4 of my AI detectors, please rewrite in your own words.
  • Skin/Character Description

 

My discord is @tarajess if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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