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Adelerd Pott

By Adelerd Pott

    • Rules: Yes
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    Discord: Dimispeed99#2633
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: that is when you use information you get in real life in game.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: that is when you do stuf unrealistic and things that harm other players
    Status: Denied

Oh hello there sir. How are you doing? 

sir: ....

I am adelerd Pott, nice to meat you. I come to this town to learn about your culture and to look around in this absolutely beatiful town. But first, do you know a good restaurant? I am a halfling after all.

Character Name: Adelerd Pott
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: He is a blond Halfling.
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason that too many errors were made.

 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

→  Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

→Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

 

→ Your Character's biggest fear must be at least 2 sentences long and include a reason behind the fear

 

→  Your Character likes and dislikes must be at least 2 sentences long and include a reason for each.

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response must make use of " for dialogue, contain at least one action and one speech too. 

 

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards, please fix this.

 

If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Demon_Lilly#9033, and I recommend you join the 

LotC Discord using the following invite: 

→ https://discord.com/invite/7sTjWYX

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