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DimonicaGirl

By DimonicaGirl

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Dimonica#8634
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is being inappropriate with the use of information in the game. Such as using information unfairly to pinpoint the location of an enemy, Metagaming is bad.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is being inappropriate with the use of roleplay in the game. Such as making unfair movements, such as overpowering my opponent and overcoming adversities in such a manner that is unfair to my opponent. Such as emoting how they react to my emotes.
    Status: Denied

Jaylin Jeopardy smiles in turn, as she looked around in utter awe at the state of the city. she tightened her grip on his sheathed sword in a leather case, as he remarked gently. " I am seeking to be a formidable, powerful mage of reknown!" she says, as he searches to find her pouch in order to embark on a shopping spree in the city.

   

Character Name: Jaylin Jeopardy
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: As her beautiful golden hair flows in the wind, and as her Green eyes overlooking her destination, with her Staff on her back she's ready!
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography states that your character's parents were killed by bandits. This is a common character trope, so please be sure to change this!

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. Dark elves do not have white skin! For more information on dark elves, you can take a look at this wiki page here: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Dark_Elves

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [sarahbarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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