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    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: lan?#1036
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you use the knowledge that your character doesn't yet know. So like if someone said something about needing help to attack an enemy but your roleplay character wasn't near them so he wouldn't know and you ended up going to help to attack.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Power gaming is when you take away the other person's control. This would mean anything to OP and taking away the chance for the other person to roleplay, so say like "Alex stole his Money* The baker wouldn't be able to attempt to catch him now if he said Alex attempted to steal the Money In that situation it would be more reasonable and be a possibility.
    Status: Denied

Upon Seririm's way onto land he smiled content with the city. He greeted the man warmly "Hello my friend" he and the man talked of the city. Seririm told him of how he came from Elvennese and would be staying a while. They conversed longer and the man told Seririm of the great wonders of the city. Seririm and the man would make there way to a tavern were they would sit and laugh for a while enjoying themselves. And Seririm stated " he hadn't been so open to someone that wasn't a family member in a long time" the man and Seririm stated there longer and talked of his pained backstory. Seririm likes the history of his people he is proud of the way they held themselves to such high standards. This is because he enjoys the fact that they were such great people and helped others.


Character Name: Seririm Silinal
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: intact dark green/light green tunic, white intact shirt, violet eyes, light black hair, slightly Muscular body-build, 6'5, 145lbs
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason that too many errors were made.

 

→  Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least TWO! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! (names of maps and vague race groups do not count)

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. High elves can't have black hair nor be over 140lbs!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=High_Elves

Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

Your  dislikes must be at least 2 sentences long and contain a reason please <3

Your Skin doesn't match your character's race and makes use of noise shading!

 

If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Demon_Lilly#9033, and I recommend you join the 

LotC Discord using the following invite: 

 https://discord.com/invite/7sTjWYX

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