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Jay Kurbis
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: dj0_
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I avoid powergaming during roleplay by giving the others a chance in decision making and fun!
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay by basically you telling your character that something is happening that they normally wouldn't know.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

He sat down in front of the the old hag and spoke, "My Father once had a honey farm that he and the neighbour managed. The other children often made fun of the neighbour and her porch-side garden, claiming that she was a witch. One day, my father got sick and he asked me to look after his bees. I donned my father's old beekeeper suit which fit loosely on my small frame, and went to tend to the bees. As I opened the beehive, I accidentally tore my veil. With the bees now swarming my face, I panicked and began running. As I ran by my neighbour's house, I snatched the first thing I could from her porch and put it on to cover my face; a carved pumpkin. With the bees now gone, I could finally take off the pumpkin... But it wouldn't come off. I sought help from countless people across the land, but nothing they did ever worked, eventually leading me here... It's as if the pumpkin became my new face. Perhaps those kids were right, maybe she really was a witch."

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Character Name: Jay Kurbis
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: 6'2, 188 lbs, Brown Hair, Brown eyes and beekeper outfit with pumpkin on head.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

-Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory is too fantastical, please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story. 

- Your skin is too modern, and the character you're applying with should be able to get that pumpking off his head.

- Your Skin does not match the race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!  Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive? https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

 

 

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You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is sefardie If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below

 

-Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory is too fantastical, please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story. 

- Your skin is too modern, and the character you're applying with should be able to get that pumpking off his head.

- Your Skin does not match the race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!  Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive? https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  sefardie ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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