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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Sgtsprickles#4143
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: It is the act of using information you learned outside of the game inside the game.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Doing something that would be unrealistic for your character
    Status: Denied

As she slowly turns around face him she replies “ I came looking for a place to start a new life “

 

She gives him a cold stare and says “ I am trying to forget the past but for now I am mainly looking for a place to lay my head drink some hot wine and earn a few coins!”

 

“ Know anyplace looking for some one who is ready to do some questionable jobs?” she ask coldly while  walking away from him into the nearest in

 


Character Name: Daria Nefhelm
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: Pale skin, Beautiful white hair, green eyes, Scare across right eye, crooked nose, green shirt and black pants blue boots
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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

 

I. Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

 

II. Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

III. Your Character Biography makes references to places that don’t exist in Lord of the Craft. If you believe that one or more of these settlements does exist, shoot me a forum PM and link me a relevant forum post, wiki page, et cetera.

 

IV. Your Character Biography states that your character was married around the time they were 25. Elves are not considered adults in their societies until 50, so if you were in almost any elven society/city you would have to be 50 before you could marry.

 

V. Your Personality Traits/Quirks are on the right track, but seem to contradict themselves (for example, you wrote that your character is annoying and polite). Please fix this, and remember to have at least one negative trait that doesn’t contradict your character’s other traits.

 

VI. Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

 

VII. Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.

https://app.grammarly.com/

 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @UwUPlant#0017 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Guide as well.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/
https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F 

 

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Your application has been denied due to no response within the allotted 24-hour timeframe. Feel free to re-apply whenever you wish! PM me here or on Discord @UwUPlant#0017 if you have questions.

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