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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using ooc info in character
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: roleplaying an action without giving other parties a chance to respond. Example Domowox comes over to jack and stabs him killing him instantly as the blade sinks in to his chest.
    Status: Denied

Albus was a human being who explored the world and would frequently find himself in new places. He love exploring the mountains and had often attempted to climb The Jade Peaks, They were quite the sight and He loved nature. He kept to himself mostly and would frequently make trips into the nearest town for supplies. He often thought about becoming a common criminal to make ends meet, but he didn't think he could bring himself to truly hurt anyone. He wanted to learn about magic and often heard tales of it, but he had not met a teacher yet, He was not good at fighting, but would when he needed. 


Character Name: Albus Severus
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Albus was about 6"3 human, He had blond hairand jet blue eyes, He was tall and broad shouldered, but not overly muscular.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been DENIED because of these reason(s):

-Unfortunately as a guest you can't make any edits to your post so I had to auto deny it rather than put it on pending. I would suggest making a forum account before reapplying, that way you will have 24 hours to make any needed changes. 

-Your bio could use a little more info about your character such as where they were born, where they grew up, anything about his family, things like that.

-Your name consists of character names from the Harry Potter book series, I suggest changing this to something appropriate for the 1600's and for our server.

-Your character description doesn't seem to match the skin you provided so you could either, mention something in the bio about him changing his hair color or change your skin to match the description you provided.

-One of your interesting facts should contain a weakness your character would have, in your bio the part about not being good at fighting could work. Please change one of your facts to a weakness. 

 

 

You may reapply in (6) hours.


 

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