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Dust

By Dust

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is forcefully controlling others in A roleplay and giving them no choice or say in what happens.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when you give a character god like powers and make it unfair to roleplay with them.
    Status: Denied

Dust said to the man "I have come here to rebuild life from scratch and do it better this time".

 

Character Name: Dust
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Dust has dusty blonde hair with brown eyes he wears a simple black tunic and robe.
Dust is 5'3 at a weight of 167.6 pounds.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!


 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. Here's a link on your character's race for more information! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Farfolk

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like!

  • Your Character Biography states that your character became a head guard after befriending a queen. I recommend editing this and all parts of your application that refer to this, since you cannot become a head guard without proper roleplay first.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Character's Likes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they like about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!

  • Your Character's Dislikes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they dislike about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!

  • Make sure to match your physical description to your character's skin!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [teawithsarah#0808]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message teawithsarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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