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Draximus7

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is using your resources in the real world to inform the character you roleplay in game.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is manipulating(and sometimes breaking) the roleplay rules to achieve a desired result within the role play server. It usually includes forcing other people into uncomfortable situations.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

Character Name: Kaldurin
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Stocky and dark haired, Kaldurin doesn't exactly look like your standard High Elf. He has a strong, angular face equipped with a stoic grin.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example for each to exemplify the definitions. 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
     

  • Your Character Biography also mentions being from a 'prominent family', and that is not permissible for new characters as a new character application cannot include claims of being of royal, prominent, famous or important descend. 

  • Your Physical Description needs to be include more definitive high elven details! The skin, and description implies he has brown hair which is not possible for a full-blooded high elf. Here is the link to the high elven wiki page which you can consult.   

  • Your Roleplay Scenario is entirely missing! Please fill it in!

  • Your Skin is entirely erroneous to be up for LoTC's standards for a high elf. Please rectify by adhering more to the high elven description on LoTc. 

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