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Droplith


Droplith
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: over using power
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Trying to be more than someone and do unrealistic things
    Status: Denied

You've just woken up on a boat you get dressed then decide to leave you step out  to see a dead member on the crew you see that you have crashed a old druid approaches you eventually you faint.


Character Name: JJ
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Old and shaken by the world
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


- Your metagaming definition is not quite right. If you need help, you can find more information here.

- Your powergaming definition needs some expanding. If you need more information, you can find it here.

- Your character biography needs a lore reference. You can find one on our wiki, on the pages for our current map, Almaris, or Major Nations and Charters.

- Dragons aren't a common occurrence on LotC. Please substitute the mention of them in your biography with something more common.

- Your character name should be their full name, as it's the name that will be shown above your head in game.

- Your character biography should be at least 6 sentences long.

- Your character's physical description needs some expanding and should be purely physical.

- Your character's personality traits need some expanding.

- Your character's fear should be at least 2 sentences.

- Your character's aspirations should be at least 2 sentences and link in with your character biography.

- Your roleplay scenario should be in third person, include both dialogue between quotes (") and actions, be at least 4 sentences long, and control only your own character.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ N¡ck#4884 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Polysemic to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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