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Oron

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: drzewko27_95555
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: i dont know
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: i dont know
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Oron
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 44
Physical Description: i like war
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

Example: 

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until… the war

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KaptainScarlet

 

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Please include your understanding of the term Powergaming and Metagaming, your current reply shows lack of understanding. If you need help, please refer to our wiki for definitions and examples: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 
  • Your roleplay scenario needs to be at least 6 sentences minimum. Including character dialogues and actions written in 3rd POV. 

EX: John grimaced upon the dirty cushion but took a seat anyway. “Hello ma’am, good evening…”

  • Lack of story-telling! Even if your character doesn’t talk about their past, please include some information regardless. You can talk about their childhood growing up, friends, families, etc.
  • Pleaser include more fore your character description.
  • Your skin is not server appropriate! Please take a look at our skin archieve: https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive (Skin)

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is KaptainScarlet! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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KaptainScarlet


 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Please include your understanding of the term Powergaming and Metagaming, your current reply shows lack of understanding. If you need help, please refer to our wiki for definitions and examples: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 
  • Your roleplay scenario needs to be at least 6 sentences minimum. Including character dialogues and actions written in 3rd POV. 

EX: John grimaced upon the dirty cushion but took a seat anyway. “Hello ma’am, good evening…”

  • Lack of story-telling! Even if your character doesn’t talk about their past, please include some information regardless. You can talk about their childhood growing up, friends, families, etc.
  • Pleaser include more fore your character description.
  • Your skin is not server appropriate! Please take a look at our skin archieve: https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive (Skin)

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is KaptainScarlet! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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