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DToxic48

By DToxic48

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Detoxx#1974
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using knowledge gained from outside the game in the game.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Doing unrealistic or unfair things, breaking the lore of the world. This includes performing impossible physical or mental feats, gaining knowledge from outside the game world or forcing others to do certain things (ie. emotes).
    Status: Denied

I hold my head up high, clearly comfortable talking to a stranger. I look at him from the bottom of his foot to the top of his head. I am being careful. I talk with a respectful tone.

“Adventure, always. Who’s asking?”

(I imagine he tells me he owns a store in the bazaar. He is just looking to “welcome new folk in town”. He then tells me I don’t look like an adventurer, mentioning my size. He gives off a creepy vibe.)

I am evidently annoyed by him. I think he is probably trying to sell me something. However, I am most annoyed by his lack of respect towards me.

“It’s dangerous to make assumptions of people in such a big world, you know?”

Character Name: Delle Toxicus
Character Race: Forest Dwarf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: I am relatively tall for a dwarf, about 5'0". I am thin but have toned muscles. I have long red hair and big green eyes. Weight: 175 lbs.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Power-gaming

    • Please go more in depth, I can not tell if you truly understand what PG means by the definition you have given. Please refer to the wiki if you need help on it.

  • Bio

    • People do not start off at “I belong to the highest class of Forest Dwarfs.” Most people would have a simple upbringing attaining this would have to be done through RP in the server. 

    • Grammar mistakes as well need to be looked after and fixed. You can use Grammarly I believe its called to proofread your bio

  • Physical Description

    • Is lacking a weight for the character, please refer to the wiki to get a weight.

  • Role Play Scenario

    • You would have to think on how your character would react. You can’t just instantly punch him in the gut, spin around him like a ninja or something and put him in a headlock. What would happen if the man had rock hard abs and your punch barely hit him or if he had chain mail on under his clothing you would simply not know. Please fix this.

    • There are also grammar mistakes that need to be attended too in this scenario as well.

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @Cad518#8811, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/

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