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durant360
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: learning info from an outside source
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: doing the impossible outside your role
    Status: Denied

Character Name: dwyer
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 1000
Physical Description: dark ears with dark grey skin you would also see a dagger on his belt in his leather chain Armour m hair is sliver /grey and my eyes are grey and red
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Greetings Applicant! As of now your application is currently:

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- Both your definitions for Metagaming and Powergaming require expansion. Please refer to the following sources in your own words: Wiki-Metagaming and Wiki-Powergaming.

 

- Please remember to format your biography when applying, so that an AT member can read it without difficulty. Also, your lore references are outdated and aren’t fully expanded upon. This biography doesn’t really detail much in terms of your character or their personality. The assassin aspect is rather edgy, unoriginal and displays powergaming aspects with terms such as ‘invisible’.

 

- Your character, being 1000 years old according to your application, would be an elder and quite likely on their deathbed, as 1000 years is the age limit for an elf. This would further implicate they’re unable to perform the feats you have listed.

 

- Your interesting facts don’t display anything interesting or personal to your character, nor do they list at least one apparent weakness your character may have. 

 

- Your skin is rather poor and doesn’t really fit with the quality we expect on Lord of the Craft. To amend this, please provide a new skin, or alternatively refer to the Skin-Archive or Tailor’s Guild for a skin that matches your persona description.

 

You have 24 hours to correct the issues listed above.  Once you have done that, please contact me either over the forums or discord: (Gilded#1905), then I will take another look at your application.

 

For important information such as lore and definitions for metagaming and powergaming, I’d recommend using both the Wiki and forums. Please use these sources for reference when making changes to your application. I’d also recommend you join Lord of the Craft’s New Player Discord should you need any assistance from myself or other members of the Application Team.

 

You can also contact me on the server, /msg GildedDuke, or create an /atreq on the server for help from other Application Team members. If you have any further questions don’t be afraid to ask!

 

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This Application has since been:

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Reasons for verdict:

 

- Both your definitions for Metagaming and Powergaming required expansion.

 

- Please remember to format your biography when applying, so that an AT member can read it without difficulty. Also, your lore references were outdated and weren’t fully expanded upon. This biography didn’t really detail much in terms of your character or their personality. The assassin aspect is rather edgy, unoriginal and displayed powergaming aspects with terms such as ‘invisible’.

 

- Your character, being 1000 years old according to your application, would be an elder and quite likely on their deathbed, as 1000 years is the age limit for an elf. This would further implicate they’re unable to perform the feats you listed.

 

- Your interesting facts didn’t display anything interesting or personal to your character, nor did they list at least one apparent weakness your character might have had.

 

- Your skin was rather poor and didn’t really fit with the quality we expect on Lord of the Craft.

 

Your 24 Hour deadline wasn’t met. However, you may reapply immediately, provided you have done so no more than 5 times this month.



 

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