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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: eap329#6294
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is when your outside life and world around you interacts with or affects your in-game life and the world there. These two are meant to be completely separate and one should not influence the other.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is performing actions in-game that are not realistic to your character or how the world around you works. In other words, you’re disregarding the consequences of certain actions/conversations or disregarding what is possible and practical for your character to do/say.
    Status: Denied

Asterism gives the man a long, skeptical gaze before replying. "Adventure."

The man quirks his eyebrow at her, silently prying for more. She shifts uncomfortably, eyes still fixed on the curious stranger. "All I've known is wealth and sophisticated society, I guess you could say I'm looking for a change."

Character Name: Asterism
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Asterism has bright blue eyes and long blonde hair that’s complemented by her fair skin. Like a typical High Elf, she’s very tall and slender.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

  • Your meta- and powergaming definitions are not quite what I'm looking for yet. Please read up on the meaning of these definitions here, and use this information to rewrite them.
  • You can not claim your character is the descendant of a member of the Haelun'or Council. These are positions obtained through roleplay, and are all played out in game. Therefore you can not claim to be related to such a person.
  • Your roleplay scenario is still a bit short, and not quite following the guidelines yet. Please rewrite your scenario, and keep the following guidelines in mind when doing so:
    • Must be at least four sentences.
    • Include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.
    • Include at least one action.
    • Cannot include any sort of metagaming or powergaming.
    • Should not project ANY thoughts into emotes. Emotes should only include what others would see, not what your character is thinking.
    • Must be in third person.
  • Your skin is not exactly matching up with the in-lore appearance of High Elves. Please look at this page, which contains the current High Elf lore.

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message DelfShadowLeader! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at qɹɐɯ#9406

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Statherian

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Hey there, the requested changes were not made within the previously mentioned 24 hour window. In addition to that, there are still a few things in your app that need to be changed.
     
  • I'd like you to again rephrase your meta-and powergaming definitions. Using the information found here.
  • Your skin still isn't really fit for the server. If you need help finding a skin, you can always take one from the skin archive.
  • Please avoid claiming your character's father knew magic. Magic is learnt entirely in game, so please remove this part from your application as to avoid confusion later on.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [qɹɐɯ#9406]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message DelfShadowLeader to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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