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    Discord: edze2012#7464
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: if i see some one powergaming i wil say "you are powergaming" if he/she dosn't stop i will say it to staf
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: if they get in formation from there friends some one is going to betray you you will kill him but you actually shouldn't attack him/her because your character is not supposed to no that information
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: "im a wandering elf, and want to  get revenge!

i lost my parents sadly three months after i was born .

Im now trying to fiend the army

of the elves.

So i can help in wars so i can get revenge when im trained!

I come from every were because everyone in my family is

a wandering elve"

 

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…


Character Name: Alen Jolar
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: simple short pants and t-shirt
dark blue eyes
not very strong but still strong
1.8 m
60 kg
tattoo on left arm
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Your application has been set to Pending for now, as we found some areas that need revising.

Don’t worry though - once your changes are made, you’ll be back on track to roleplaying with us in no time.

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

- Your Metagaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- In your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory, please make sure to include at least six sentences. If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where your character is from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your character’s parents?


- In your Backstory & Roleplay Scenario, you have used a common trope of "Orcs killed my family". Please try to be a little more creative with your character's backstory, as this is a very common trope. If you would like to read up more on tropes to avoid, check out this link:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193362-character-tropes-guide/

 

- Please make sure to use physical actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario.

 

You have 48 hours to make these changes.

Once your changes are complete, please reach out to me on the forums @Amayonnaise. You can also click on my name here to find my profile.

 

 If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance:

Discord

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions, or to receive help from other players with your pending application.

 

If you need more ideas, or to research more roleplay lore, feel free to check out the Wiki:

Wiki

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub:

New Player Hub

 

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied. Your 48 hour editing period has passed. However, you are more than welcome to immediately reapply, just remember to edit and change everything listed below:

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

- Your Metagaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- In your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory, please make sure to include at least six sentences. If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where your character is from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your character’s parents?


- In your Backstory & Roleplay Scenario, you have used a common trope of "Orcs killed my family". Please try to be a little more creative with your character's backstory, as this is a very common trope. If you would like to read up more on tropes to avoid, check out this link:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193362-character-tropes-guide/

 

- Please make sure to use physical actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario.

 

If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance: 

Discord 

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub: 

New Player Hub 

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