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Egap_Pie

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Egap#5131
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: idk what it means
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: idk what it means
    Status: Denied

Egap walks in to an empty home to find selter for the night. He goes to sleep , suddendly 

a witch flashes his eye with a dark spell. than he fills the room with undead rats. Egap runs as fast as he can to the door to leave the house, hes body full of rats but he just on time manages to escape

Character Name: Egap Frey
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 29
Physical Description: average weight he isnt buffed but he is very fit
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your character cannot start off as nobility, so please be sure to edit this!

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Your character cannot know how to use magic yet. Please be sure to change this part of your Roleplay Scenario Response.

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [sarahbarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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