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Thorrin

By Thorrin

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: darcy#4043
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: It means that things outside of the game Information you just forget when you play
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: I'm pretty sure it makes it less unfair by making the player to try and stop the person from doing something
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

I am here from lands faraway to Adventure  these lands.

* Puts hand around person*

Show me around this fine town and lets stop by the tavern  while we are at it. 

* Hiddenly  takes gold from the mans bag. *

 {Yea that all i can thing of.. :3 }

Character Name: Thorin
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: Blue eyes, Black hair, Fit, 6.2, 114.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

 https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

→  Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

→ Your character's dislikes/likes about themselves should be elaborated on further! You can link this to your backstory as well.

→ Be sure to establish why your character fears dragons in particular. 

→  Your Physical Description does not match your character's race! The max height a dwarf can be is 5'0.  I recommend looking at this page for more information!  https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Dwarves

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src= https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.   

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

 

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