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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: elvengames
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Instead of saying what happens, say things like tried or attempted to allow the opposition a chance to attempt a counter.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming gives me the player of a character unfair knowledge because I know something because I was told or saw it out of character, giving my character an unfair advantage over others.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Elven Baelor
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: 6'4, 185lbs, Elven is tall and slender with brown hair and blue eyes. He wears a chainmail armor set that he made himself.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

 

Elven Baelor adjusted the weight of his chainmail, the metal links clicking softly in the heavy, humid air of the tent. He sat, though his posture remained stiff, the gold trim of his blue cloak shimmering fitfully in the candlelight. He looked at the hag, his eyes reflecting a weariness that didn't quite belong on a man of his years.

"You've been expecting me?" Elven asked, his voice steady despite the strange atmosphere. "Then perhaps you already know the ending. But since you asked for the beginning..."

He looked down at his calloused palms—hands shaped by the forge, not the court.

 

"I am Elven, of House Baelor. My father is a master of the anvil in the Empire of Man. He spent his life trying to temper me, I think. My mother passed when I was only three, a shadow I barely remember. Her death... it broke something in my brother, Silas. He was seven years my senior, and when he turned sixteen, he simply walked into the horizon. I was nine. I haven't seen him since."

He reached out to touch the blue fabric of his cloak, smoothing the gold embroidery.

"My father took me under his wing after that. He kept me close to the heat of the coals, teaching me the song of the hammer to keep me from wandering like Silas. And I stayed. I stayed until I was twenty, swinging a hammer until my arms ached and the soot lived in my skin. But the fire in the forge wasn't enough. I wanted to serve the King. I wanted to be a Royal Knight—to be the shield, not just the smith who crafts it."

 

Elven’s expression softened, then turned bitter. "I headed for the capital, but my path took me through the Forest of Iryalen. That is where I met Eyra. A wood elf. She saw the man beneath the steel, and for a moment, the King’s court felt a lifetime away."

He gripped the hilt of his sword, his knuckles whitening.

"Her kin did not share her heart. They saw a human trespasser, a 'breaker of iron.' They hunted me out of those woods like a common beast. I didn't leave because I was finished with her; I left because I wanted to live long enough to see her again."

Elven looked up at the hag, the dim candlelight catching the determination in his gaze. "So, I followed the star-charts and the muddy roads until I reached this wretched place. I wear this blue for my father’s house, and this gold to remind me of the vow I haven't yet fulfilled."

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Character Name
    • I am going to suggest a complete name change. While you can probably have the name Elven as a human, you may have issues in rp with that name. Baelor is a popular GoT name, well known in pop culture, so we try to steer away from that.
  • Roleplay Sample
    • 'Master of the Anvil' needs to be changed as currently, the Empire of Man is very alive and well. I do not believe that is a title. We recommend applying as lowborn or common folk so you do not start off with influence, as a new player, nobody knows you. Plenty of time to build influence when on the server.



 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @tarajessto let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

  • Character Name
    • I am going to suggest a complete name change. While you can probably have the name Elven as a human, you may have issues in rp with that name. Baelor is a popular GoT name, well known in pop culture, so we try to steer away from that.
  • Roleplay Sample
    • 'Master of the Anvil' needs to be changed as currently, the Empire of Man is very alive and well. I do not believe that is a title. We recommend applying as lowborn or common folk so you do not start off with influence, as a new player, nobody knows you. Plenty of time to build influence when on the server.

 

My discord is @tarajessif you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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