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Theren

By Theren

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I am used to roleplaying and have played D&D. I am aware of this and while playing roleplay games I avoid it.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: I understand this a lot for example when my friends read the monster manual it disrupts play because they know things they should not.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

I stumble to the cushion tired from a long journey. "I was sent to find you. My village was attacked, the elder grabbed me and told me to run to you. He said you could help me harness my skills." The Hag inclines her head as if to say yes... 
 

Character Name: Theren Nai'lo
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Strong. Blue eyes. 130 lbs. 6 ft 3 in. Uses light elven chainmail armor. Dirty Blond hair. Carries a sword and a magic item of some sort.
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Amayonnaise

Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has been set to Pending for now, as we found some areas that need revising.

Don’t worry though - once your changes are made, you’ll be back on track to roleplaying with us in no time.

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

- Your character’s Physical Description states that they possess a magic item. Your character can’t learn how to use magic, or have magic items, until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me.

 

- In your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory, please make sure to include at least six sentences. If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where your character is from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your character’s parents?

 

- When talking about your character’s actions, remember to use 3rd person.
 

- Your skin looks as if your character has an arm of fire, and an arm of water, please clarify if the arms are just fancy sleeves or not! You may message me privately if you would like! If you would like to try and find a new skin, please take a look at our skin archive:

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

You have 48 hours to make these changes.

Once your changes are complete, please reach out to me on the forums @Amayonnaise. You can also click on my name here to find my profile.

 

 If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance:

Discord

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions, or to receive help from other players with your pending application.

 

If you need more ideas, or to research more roleplay lore, feel free to check out the Wiki:

Wiki

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub:

New Player Hub

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Amayonnaise

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied. Your 48 hour editing period has passed. However, you are more than welcome to immediately reapply, just remember to edit and change everything listed below:

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

- Your character’s Physical Description states that they possess a magic item. Your character can’t learn how to use magic, or have magic items, until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me.

 

- In your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory, please make sure to include at least six sentences. If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where your character is from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your character’s parents?

 

- When talking about your character’s actions, remember to use 3rd person.
 

- Your skin looks as if your character has an arm of fire, and an arm of water, please clarify if the arms are just fancy sleeves or not! You may message me privately if you would like! If you would like to try and find a new skin, please take a look at our skin archive:

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance: 

Discord 

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub: 

New Player Hub 

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