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Emeraldeye
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Dark Elf whos mother left in the woods when he was very young. But now he is an independent elf who has to fight to survive.:eyeonyou: 


Character Name: Emerald Eye
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: He is a silent but deadly elf who can sneak up on his enemies at any time.On the other hand he is very caring and loving towards his friends.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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-Your explaination of why meta-gaming and power-gaming are bad for roleplay doesnt explain how either are bad to roleplay. Take a look at the definitions linked on the top of the  the 'add new application' page as to orient yourself with what meta-gaming and power-gaming are, as to better answer the question.

 

-Your character's biography isnt really a biography, merely a single sentence. That is far too short. How did your character survive being abandoned in the woods at birth? Babies abandoned in the woods dont exactly fend for themselves.

 

-Your character's biography includes no server lore. Take a look at the server wiki (which is linked through the 'wiki' tab at the top of the page) as to orient yourself with some of the basic in-character information of the server, as to integrate it int your character's biography.

 

-Your character was abandoned in the woods at birth- yet... somehow had thier brother die in their arms? What? How?

 

-Your minecraft skin is incompatible with being a dark elf. As dark elves standardly have dark grey skin.

 

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a private message over the forums if you have any questions.

 

 

 

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