Emeraldmine56

-Your explaination of why meta-gaming and power-gaming are bad for roleplay doesnt explain how either are bad to roleplay. Take a look at the definitions linked on the top of the  the 'add new application' page as to orient yourself with what meta-gaming and power-gaming are, as to better answer the question.

-Your character's biography isnt really a biography, merely a single sentence. That is far too short. How did your character survive being abandoned in the woods at birth? Babies abandoned in the woods dont exactly fend for themselves.

-Your character's biography includes no server lore. Take a look at the server wiki (which is linked through the 'wiki' tab at the top of the page) as to orient yourself with some of the basic in-character information of the server, as to integrate it int your character's biography.

-Your character was abandoned in the woods at birth- yet... somehow had thier brother die in their arms? What? How?

-Your minecraft skin is incompatible with being a dark elf. As dark elves standardly have dark grey skin.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

-Feel free to send me a private message over the forums if you have any questions.