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    Referral: Other
    Discord: flyingdoritoss
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Don’t force actions or outcomes on other players. for example “I stab you and you die”. you need to let others respond and decide how their characters react.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using out-of-character knowledge (like info from chat or Discord) in character breaks the immersion and makes the story unfair.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Aeden
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: I am 180 centimetres tall with blue eyes and brown hair. i weight 80 kgs and i wear a green robe with an arrow quiver and brown leather shoes.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

I brush the damp hood from my face, water dripping from the edges as i step closer to the flickering candles.

“My story?” i murmur, my voice is soft but steady. The scent of swamp moss mixes with the faint aroma of burnt sage. “I was once a warden of the northern woods a keeper of paths no mortal should tread. But something foul began seeping into the roots. Trees whispered of decay. Spirits vanished.”

I pause, glancing toward the hag’s cloudy eyes. “I followed the trail here, through mist and mud. Whatever corruption haunts the forest... it started in this place.”

I lower myself onto the cushion, hand still resting on the hilt of your curved dagger. “So tell me, seer.. what is it you’ve been expecting me for?”

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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