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Enderwrath999


Enderwrath999
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: when your character knows things it shouldn't
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Commanding another player to make a specific action
    Status: Denied

As a child, he was nameless, different than other orcs. during a great battle, he was left behind, for the others of his species saw him as a threat. the elves rescued him,  and he learned  more of the world. he made his way to caras eldar, but was not fond of the crowds. he left, becoming a great warrior. It is because of his great anger and strength that he was finally named "The wrath".

 


Character Name: The wrath
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: A dark blue, fanged thing.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello! Your application has been placed under…

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A) Your name must be a real one. i suggest making an elven-like name or something similar, that way it fits with the story you've chosen for your character.

B) Your biography is a bit short. Try adding some back story or future goals to help flesh it out! You could add some information such as: How old was your character when he was rescued? Was he raised by the elves? What types of things did he learn while with the orcs? What did he learn with the elves? Does he intend to learn shamanism or follow Aspectism? These are great questions to help flesh out your character for their biography!

C) Please provide an example of power-gaming and meta-gaming. 
 

If any of the reasons you have been denied involve the Wiki, you may use this link to go straight to the home page. The home page has links to the power-emoting and meta-gaming definitions, as well as links to find the server lore you are looking for. Click here to go to the Wiki!


 

Fear not! Being placed under pending does not mean you have been denied. Your application is solid, but could use a few tweaks to help get your application stablized. You have 24 hours to implement the tweaks using the [Edit] feature on the forum. When you have made the changes, contact me (on the forums or on Discord) and I will review the application once more. After 24 hours your application will be either Accepted or Denied. In the case of Denial, you will need to wait 3 hours before making another application.

 

I recommend joining the New Player Discord for assistance in finding answers. It is a helpful tool that will not only help during your application process but also help as a tool once you are implemented on the server.

 

If you have any further questions, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, on Discord (Sakura#8726) or on the server with /msg countessem command. You may also use /atreq to place a ticket for assistance with myself or any of the other Application Team staff!

 

I wish you the best!

 

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Hello! Your application has been:

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For the following reasons:

A) The edits requested were not done after 24 hours.
 

If any of the reasons you have been denied involve the Wiki, you may use this link to go straight to the home page. The home page has links to the power-emoting and meta-gaming definitions, as well as links to find the server lore you are looking for. Click here to go to the Wiki!

 

You need not worry, however! You may reapply again as soon as you’d like!

 

If you have further questions or need to contact someone for help, please use this Discord link [Link] and ask any questions you may have. This Discord is our New Player Discord and will a useful tool to help you get started both in your application and in the world once you are implemented!

 

If you have any further questions, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, on Discord (Sakura#8726) or on the server with /msg countessem command. You may also use /atreq to place a ticket for assistance with myself or any of the other Application Team staff!

 

I wish you the best!

 

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