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Entita70
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using information like gandalf heve this power, but tecnically in an rpg a characters can't know this
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: ignoring totally the rules of an rpg and make yourself the super hero
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

" i only want to help some person and make adventure, where can i find a quest?"


Character Name: Ereven
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 45
Physical Description: easly killed in meele and with bow, tall, blue hair, a metallic leg (an orc cut it), a red eye and a purple eye, thiny but strong im magic
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. Dark elves cannot have blue hair!

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your character cannot know magic and must learn it in roleplay, so be sure to edit this part of your Physical Description.
     

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [sarahbarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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