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By eridak

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: eridak123#4492
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: When you are trying to take advantage of knowledge that wouldn't make sense, but be helpful, for your character to know.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Saying that your character is doing something that is exclusively at the determinant of another character. This is forced on the other character as if the person powergaming is writing the script. This typically also runs the fun of everyone else around.
    Status: Denied

"My business in this city is one of soil, not the trivialities of candor. " Maria begins to walk away leisurely. "I come seeking seeds and discussion on harvest, however with the look of your dress I doubt you could provide." Maria begins to turn away from the man, making sure to lead with her shoulder. "So, pardon me, but I must find the women who know the earth, not the men who know the stalls." Maria leaves from earshot.

Character Name: Maria Santos
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: A rather plain woman with tensive eyes and curly brown hair. She has blue eyes, is tall with a hearty build.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your powergaming definition is not what I'm looking for. Please read up on the server-used definition here, and rewrite your current definition.
  • Your roleplay scenario does not include an action yet. I'm looking for at least one action, written in the third person to describe what your character is doing in between dialogue.

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message DelfShadowLeader! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at qɹɐɯ#9406

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [qɹɐɯ#9406]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ColonelMarb1 to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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