EthanGamerOP

Hello there, EthangamerOP!

I am afraid that there are some edits that you need to make on your application. I have listed them below so that you can make the required changes. Be aware that you have 24 hours to make these application, otherwise your application will be denied.

Edits required:

• Definitions: You need to add a clear explanation as to what roleplay is, as well as explain powergaming and metagaming in more depth. Furthermore, include an example of powergaming and metagaming through the use of a roleplay scenario so that I know you understand these definitions clearly.
• Backstory: You need to include one or more LotC lore within your backstory - this can range from the names of cities, to the names of particular plants, animals, etc. Also, do  go more in depth regarding your character, such as how he was raised, what particular events occurred within his life, and what skills he gained. A noteworthy piece of talk about is the death of his parents.
• Skin: The minecraft skin for your character does not match up to his race - Dark elves have grey and dark skin tones, and cannot bear brown hair or eyes. Also - while not a compulsory change you need to make, I do advise changing the outfit of your character into something more unique, as the outfit you are using is a very commonly used skin. 

Aside from that, you got the basics of the application down. Remember, you have 24 hours to make the requested changes on your application. When you are done with the edits, simply post a comment on your application and tag me through @farryn or by PMs - that way, I will know you have made the edits and want the application reviewed again.

Farryn's Guides and Tips:

• Here's a guide that will help you with making the edits, as well as help you understand more about the race you are playing. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/143584-how-to-make-your-elf-right/
• There are users on the website who will be happy to create a skin for your character. Or you can choose an outfit to use on the forum's skin archive where you can use and edit the following skins: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/161821-the-lotc-skin-archive/. However, if you are struggling to gain a new outfit for your character's skin due to being unable to make one or none on the skin archive fit your character, I am happy to make an outfit for your character for free. Be aware you must at least make the changes to the skin and appearance by yourself, I will only make the outfit. Simply send me a PM should you want an outfit made.

I am sorry but your application has been denied due to the following changes not being made. Do not worry though, you can reapply within three hours. Additionally, you can use the feedback I gave you to improve on your next application.

Good luck!