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Exculant

By Exculant

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: 𝓟𝓮𝓻𝓲𝓸𝓭#4733
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: idk
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: idk
    Status: Denied

I look up to the man as he speaks, and I respond  with a question, "why does it concern you why I'm here it is not your buisnness why I'm here now all that is relavent to you is my name and what you can gain from knowing me" ....

Character Name: Exculant
Character Race: Adunian
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: god like looking character that is quite young but knows quite a lot of the universes hidden secrets and of the realm he walks
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camocat9

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to multiple reasons, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • You must include Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions. Please review our Wiki’s definitions! I also recommend including an example so I know you fully understand.
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your Physical Description states that your character was "god like looking". This does not help visualize anything about your character-- please include more specific things such as height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc.
  • Your Physical Description must be purely physical! Don’t include any details about their personality!
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Character Fear works, but you need to include mention of it in your character biography.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long.
  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix this accordingly!
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Your clothing is too modern. Adunians cannot have gray skin. Adunians cannot have purple eyes. Adunians cannot have horns. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like, and I'd suggest taking a look at the wiki page on Adunians to learn more about how they can look and how they can't!


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @camocat9#9373, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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