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Whipmaster Zane

By Whipmaster Zane

    • Rules: Yes
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: i stick incharectar
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it makes it so its not fun and ppple who dont metagame have a unfair dissadvantige
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Whipmaster Zane
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 34
Physical Description: wears a mean whip, blue robes and a black pouch containing tamers tools
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

(i am a tamer who had a noble backround. i came here for the thirst of adventure.

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. Your response is not quite right. Ensure to include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 
  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are (royalty/nobility/notable/well-known/ too wealthy), please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story.
  • In your Roleplay Scenario & Background, please remember to add dialogue of your character speaking! This is to ensure we know what your character is doing!
  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks.
    • Example: Judy laughs. “How are you doing?”
  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing! When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!
    • Example: Judy stomps her foot on the ground. “How dare you!” she screams.
  • Your Physical Description could use a bit more detail! If you’re unsure what to add, consider including details like height, eye color, hair color and length, clothing style, and other distinctive features. These are all great starting points!
  • Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! High elves don't have brown hair. Please refer to the Racial Hub Wiki page for more information on the appearance of high elves.
  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you! Or please take a look at our skin archive!
  • Please fix your grammar, spelling, & punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.


My discord is @elkuknight. If you have any questions, feel free to reach out. I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask for help in the LOTC Discord.

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord https://discord.com/invite/lotc

If you still need help, check the wiki! Wiki https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/212839-new-player-hub

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