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FableReign

By FableReign

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: Jae Kun #9582
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: When game information outside of what is allowed in a game is used to give a player a step ahead in-game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: consists of completing end game results, disregarding everything else that forms the game as a whole
    Status: Denied

"Thank you for the kind greeting sir!" Jax said enthusiastically. "I need a fresh beginning and leave my past in the past honestly. I've learn how to survive on my own but life with more security builds an easy nights rest, heh." Jax chuckled nervously to the kind hearted gentlemen. "By any chance do you know where living accommodations are Mr. [-]?" Jax asked with a soothing voice charming the older man.

 

Jax saw that the man dropped a fifty bill and stepped on it with his foot claiming his self proclaimed prize.

 

"do you mean that way sir?" Jax said causing the man to turn distracted. he quickly pocketed the bill, and off he went. He walked off and he muttered to himself, "mom and dad deserve better.." as he adjusted his overcoat.

Character Name: Jax Duelz
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: black hair, olive eyes, red jacket, black long sleeve undershirt, grey pants.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to these reasons:

A good start to the application, though it needs some more effort/reworking, I would recommend applying again after fixing these!

→Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 

→Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
        Furthermore, try not to use a common character trope such as “parents were killed by bandits/raiders,” think outside of the box!

→Your Biggest Fear should not be a common trope like “fear of death” because everyone has a natural aversion to death. Try to think outside of the box!

→Your Likes/Dislikes should be at least 2 sentences, and should also contain reasoning for why the character has those likes and dislikes.


If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord Chenn#6807, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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