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FacuCosteleta
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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I like to prioritize fun, and my way to have fun is by roleplaying, embracing failure, and trying to get the best outcomes for me as long as they fit my character. Roleplaying is not about winning, it's about the experience.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: As I said previously, it removes all the fun of roleplaying, ergo, it makes the game boring, predictable and increases the chances of powergaming.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

Trusting Rasha's word, I sit in the cushion. I've traveled for the good part of this day, so it's nice to take a rest and lower my guard. Traveling on foot through a swamp is no easy task for a dwarf carrying such a heavy bag.
I take a small breath.

 

"I see that Rasha's letter reached you, oh wise witch of the swamps."

 

She looks at me, maybe dissapointed that I didn't anwser her question yet.

 

"I'm Hulrigg, from the Steelbeard Clan, the proud heir of the mines of Imbantointh. I seek your help, for my people had been enslaved by the ferocious orcs that go by the name 'The Red Fangs'."

 

The witch rises an eyebrow. She seems to be familiar with these savages.

 

"This barbaric horde has besieged our mine for years until my brave father, Helrigg, took charge against them. When we marched out of the mine to face their forces, we found nothing, only snow, and an abandoned camp. Shortly after, the sun was covered by a rain of arrows that killed almost everyone. The floor shook as rocks fell from the mountain, trapping me under the snow."

 

As I tell her about the downfall of my clan, I can see her shake her head, she knew this story. Rasha was right, she knows what I'm after.

 

"I survived thanks to my uncle, Gilgeas, who took me to his farm outside the mine and trained me in combat. He also taught me about "the outside world" and its people, and how to travel and survive in the wild. In my travels seeking strength, I met your old aquantice, Rasha, the hunter of Vidos. She told me to meet you, that you could guide me into the ruins of Hug Darul. I don't have gold, but I can provide you with any service you see fit for your help. "


Character Name: Hulrigg
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: 24-year-old dwarf. 4'6", boasts a chestnut beard with metal braids—a nod to clan tradition. He shuns, favoring ragged leather pants.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your answer is a bit lacking, please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. Metagaming and Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here How to do CRP

  • A slight revision! you are a starter character, that means up until now you've been a background character. I recommend changing the backstory into one that doesn't include being part of a noble/royal/prominent clan.


 

Please make these changes within 48 hours!

Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord @unibearse or on the forums @UniBearse

 

Feel free to reach out if you need help!

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

-Your answer is a bit lacking, please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. Metagaming and Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here How to do CRP
 

-A slight revision! you are a starter character, that means up until now you've been a background character. I recommend changing the backstory into one that doesn't include being part of a noble/royal/prominent clan.



If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!
 

WIKI

New Player Hub.

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