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Vurru
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Faxyff
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Leaving, or like calling out the unfairness.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Leaves the other roleplayers at a disadvantage for being fair.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


I stare at her blankly, as if not processing the words she's spoken to me. With a dull gaze, I quietly take my place in the spot the elderly woman has offered to me. I stare at her before speaking, my throat horse from lack of water and lips so shriveled and dry you can see my pearly yellows a small amount even when my mouth is closed, "My story?..." I ask confused, staring at her, though I gain no response. Her unmoved stare is locked on me, and I cannot shake my discomfort. "My story, right. I used to live with my family, which was quite large. A month ago I decided I wanted to get away from them and make a bunch of money without realizing I struggle to survive on my own, going as far to say I can't. I had no plan, and am paying the price for my greed and stupidity." I stare at the old woman expecting to gain pity or a mocking tone however I am met with no response once again. Anger filling me from lack of conversation, I huff and crawl my way out of the tent before trying to slam the cloth entrance to no avail. Stomping away, I curse the unmoved wench under my breath.


Character Name: Vurru
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Tall, skinny, light, White hair, grey skin, red eyes. He is rather frail for a dark elf and has horrible posture to go along with it.
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Changed Status to Pending

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Please make the following changes in the next 48 hours:

  • Please adjust your meta-gaming and powergaming responses to indicate how you would avoid doing them yourself. If you need more help with these terms feel free to look at our wiki entry here: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Please adjust your backstory to be written in third person, as this is the type of roleplay that is done on Lotc.

 

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If you have any specific questions, please feel free to message me on discord:

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Changed Status to Denied

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Please adjust your meta-gaming and powergaming responses to indicate how you would avoid doing them yourself. If you need more help with these terms feel free to look at our wiki entry here:  
  • Please adjust your backstory to be written in third person, as this is the type of roleplay that is done on Lotc.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

If you have any specific questions, please feel free to message me on discord:

Orlanth#3080

If you need general help,  you can join the LotC Discord here:

 https://discord.gg/lotc

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki:

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

For additional help, here is a link to the new player hub:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/212839-new-player-hub

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