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Fedo_Sarto

By Fedo_Sarto

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Fedo_Sarto#0047
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: For me, Metagaming means when your character knows what's happening in the game from any external reference.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When you force another player to do what you want.
    Status: Denied

His parents were killed by some assassins when he was only 11. He ran out of home and for the next 7 years he lived in the forest of Taloon's Port. he has many friends, and he even had 2 girlfriends and 1 boyfriend. He has a new boyfriend named Brandon Emily.

He always lived easily, helping others with his friends.

Character Name: AredHel Marcus
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: A high, skinny Wood Elf.
His ears are really long (80 cm), his lower canines are 4 cm long and he has light blue eyes.
He always wear a mask.
Roleplay Scenario:

He would say: "Greetings! I'm searching for a new home, friends and possibly wealth". "May you tell me where i can find at least one of those?"

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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied. Please check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description States your character has 4 cm long canine teeth. The teeth of wood elves are the same as humans have in real life, meaning having 4 cm long canine teeth is too long. Please correct this! 

  • Your Character's Fears Response must be at least two sentences in length and include a reason why. 

  • Your Character's Dislikes Response must be at least two sentences in length and include a reason why. 

  • Your Character's Likes Response must be at least two sentences in length and include a reason why. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

    • Your character is too light for a wood elf, I recommend referencing this chart for the skin tones of a wood elf. Any of the colors not X-ed out would match for a wood elf! 

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You can submit a new application and try again right after, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below! 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums, my discord [ audyush#7358 ], in-game with /message audyush to find me in-game, or you can also use /creq in-game and myself or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

 

 If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

 

Also, I would recommend that you read over the Wiki!

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