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Fedo_Sarto

By Fedo_Sarto

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    Discord: <§Fedo_Sarto§>#0047
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it's a term used to identify a player that uses out-of-roleplay knowledge to manipulate the storyline.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it's a term used to identify a player that always tries to advantage their character and manipulate others.
    Status: Denied

He was born at the start of the great collapse of Aegis, but still his parents loved him so much.
But he had to run away when he was 14 because he had anger issues, and people were scared of him.
He never had many friends.
Since then, he's been alone. He was able to craft himself tools, armour and survive till now.
 

Character Name: AredHel Marcus
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: he's tall, no hair, yellow eyes and black skin. He has sharp teeth and long canines. his Ears are really long and he wears a crown and a cape.
Roleplay Scenario:

Good Afternoon! I'm here for adventure, i've been surviving my whole life.
Before i forget, do you know where i can find a place to stay for the night?

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Melpomenne

Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. High Elves can not have black skin.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [minty#8400]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Melpomenne to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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