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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Brognog#2955
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: information gained from a out of character used whilst in character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: use of unrealistic or unfair actions in game
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

Character Name: Zoe Jennings
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: a fairly small elf 4ft7". with long length brown hair, green eyes, wears simple gear with light armour. bares a large scare on her stomach.
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Due to:  Please do not plagiarize our definitions of Metagaming and Powergaming from the Wiki,  they're supposed to be in your own words. 

In addition, please change the following in your next application.


Ø Your biography lacked two sufficient lore references (Settlement names, creature names (creatures that are unique to LOTC not your generic dragon or trolls), other major events that are explained in depth), however races, nations names and vaguely conveyed facts are not sufficient lore reasons. Make sure these match up with your age and the current server year of 1806 (10 of  the Second Age). Some places you can look for references are, you can also PM on disc and I can help find more than the listed here - As well increase the length by abi:

  • Aegrothond

  • Almenodrim

  • Siramenor  (This is a dissolved Wood-Elven vassal of Elvenesse, but your persona can originate from here)

  • Elven Sub-Forum (You can find events here that are part of LOTC and contains a alot of info when you click into the post)

  • Dominion of Malin (Do know in order to use anything from Dominion, besides events such as things you were present at your age is required to match up, as the dominion was dissolved over 90+ years ago).

  • Gladewynn (Likewise, when researching Gladeywnn ensure you age matches up with the timeline).

  • Wood Elves
     

Ø Your RP scenario response must be four sentences long and include an action - it as well does not follow the pre given context. Please fix this 

Ø Your appearance does not match up with our defintions of what wood elves look like, with your skin being too light. If you’re having trouble with this check out the skin archive found here! Or ask in the Discord

If you believe this was denied by mistake contact me through the information below. You may make a new application whenever.

  

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Evonpire#0044), my forum account, or on the server (Evonpire). You can join our discord.  You can also check out our New Player guide.

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