FionnH

You will have 24 hours to make the following changes to your application. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord (TwistedFries#1055) once you have made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.
 

• I’d recommend re-reading the definitions of both Meta-gaming and Power-gaming. Both of your definitions are understandable yet vague so, a good way to prove that you know the definitions of these two terms would be through using examples. 
• Your Character Biography is lacking with regards to relevant information from LotC- It does not appear to be at a minimum of (10) sentences, including you are missing the mandatory (2) lore pieces from the LotC Wiki.
• Your Character’s Physical Description seems to be incomplete sentences so, I would advise you to look over that and make it at least (1-3) complete sentences.
• Your Character Traits/Quirks appear as though you have the ideas, but I would recommend placing them into (1-3) complete sentences, while also including at least (1) significant negative trait.
• Your Roleplay Scenario response looks good, however, It would need to include an emote/action as well.
  
  You can also join our New Player Discord- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums, or through my discord (TwistedFries#1055) for any questions or concerns.

Sorry! Be that as it may, your application has been denied because the 24 hour period has ended and because you didn’t follow the changes I had given once you were placed under pending. However, you are allowed to reapply immediately as long as you follow the required changes while doing so.

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through my discord (TwistedFries#1055) or here on my forum account.

• Your Character Biography is lacking with regards to relevant information from LotC- It does not appear to be at a minimum of (10) sentences, including you are missing the mandatory (2) lore pieces from the LotC Wiki.
• Your Character’s Physical Description seems to be incomplete sentences so, I would advise you to look over that and make it at least (1-3) complete sentences.
• Your Character Traits/Quirks appear as though you have the ideas, but I would recommend placing them into (1-3) complete sentences, while also including at least (1) significant negative trait.
• Your Roleplay Scenario response looks good, however, It would need to include an emote/action as well.