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    • Rules: No
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Firemutt#5602
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: referring to ooc websites and finding out about rare things that you would have know way of finding out about ic and using them ic ex: making your character know all about dark magic even though in rp they would know nothing of it
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: using un-realistic character traits such as powers and/or making yourself seem all powerful ex: he would take out the entire army single handedly killing every one of them
    Status: Denied

"h-hi si-sir I'm here to try to get myself the life I never had I'm not wealthy I spent all my money to get here". she would hold out an empty bag and tip it showing there was nothing in it "s-see l-like I said nothing". "I-is th-that all if so I will be going now". she would walk past him nervously continuously looking behind her.

Character Name: Utzenera Antiente
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: she has long straight black hair, purple eyes, unnatural purple skin (compared to other elves), and is almost always in some sort of dress
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has been put on PENDING , as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! Please note that whilst your character wants to learn magic , which is fine, she can ONLY learn this through roleplay with a teacher with a certified TA, and you yourself must make an accepted MA.

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @拿铁#1608 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

  • your character can not have any knowledge or ability to use magic, especially dark magic prior to learning of and how to use such in roleplay on the server itself. 
  • Why is your character not like other's? how did this come to be? and why does it affect her? 

 


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @latte#1608, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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