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Flameivlis
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using information you may know out of character in roleplay to give yourself an advantage.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Controlling other characters and/or acting as if something does not effect your character. A more common example would be to use abilities that are beyond your realistic capabilities.
    Status: Denied

Growing up on a small farm, Welkin Terrenwalk, a Hanseti Highlander, had always dreamed to achieve something more with his life. He and his twin brother Gange would have sword fights everyday since they were little, both hoping that this "training" would lead them to a life of recognition, fame, and fulfillment. As he grew older Welkin's goal became more detailed. After having read stories of the great Horen, Welkin became inspired. Welkin  craves to live a life like Horen, settling new cities and being a leader of people who appreciate him. Rather then just wanting to be famous, he decided that he would travel the world to meet and gather faithful companions. After he decides he has enough, Welkin will continue his travels to a beautiful land in Atlas and form his own nation. Now at the ripe age of eighteen Welkin knows what he desires is a daunting task, but he isn't afraid of the trial, tribulations, or however many years it takes to achieve his dream. So today, with the blessing of his father and mother, Welkin heads out into the world to begin this new chapter of his life. 


Character Name: Welkin Terrenwalk
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Welkin is 5'10 with short light brown hair, hazel eyes, and he wears a red coat over a thin black undershirt with a good pair of boots on his feet.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

Hello there, your application is currently

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For the following reasons

Your backstory while well written , needs to reference server lore further please refer to wiki linked below 

 

your skin is a little modern, please refer to this and make changes needed  https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/161821-the-lotc-skin-archive/
 


 

If any of the reasons above involve the wiki here is the link wiki , this link will take you to the homepage.On here you will find all the server lore as well as the descriptions of powergaming and metagaming.

 

Your application being placed on pending means it was good, although there is still some issues, that need a little editing.From now you will have 24 hours to edit, once changes have been made please contact me either on the server via /msg Punisher8817 or on Discord Pun#6347. I will be happy to answer any questions you may have.

 

Also this is the link to our new player discord https://discord.gg/eySYjqw. Here you can ask questions, meet other players.

 

On the server you can also /atreq to place a ticket for assistance from either myself or a member of the application team.

 

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Hello there, your application has been

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Your application was denied for the following reasons

 ~ Plagiarism is not allowed , your backstory flagged up plagiarisms, you need to write in your own words 

 

You may apply again when you are ready, if you need help with this please feel free to contact myself or another member of the Application team. Or join our new player discord and ask for help there, this is the link https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

Also here is our wiki link, wiki homepage  , here you will find our lore as well as other useful information such as the meaning for metagaming and powergaming.

 

If you have any questions please feel free to msg me here on the forums , on discord Pun#6347 or in game with /msg Punisher8817.

 

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