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Tyrler

By Tyrler

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: ZeroGnat123#6862
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: it would not be really that good cus that's just finding out info of the other person in real life and just saying it in the roleplay.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: that is way too op just being a god is to harsh to other people.
    Status: Denied

just adventure hey could you show me around the place?

Character Name: Tyler
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: he has sorta like a blue looking clothes and has a fox mask on his back because its his spiratual animal and he uses it to hunt animals.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography states that your character was raised by a forest elf. These do not exist in LoTC lore, so please be sure to edit this.

  • Your Character Biography states that your character's village had been capturing dragons. Dragons are rather rare and can only be encountered through story-team led events, so I recommend editing this part of your biography as well.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [sarahbarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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