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fqils

By fqils

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    Discord: Animelover#9696
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I don't understand the questing.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: I don't understand the questing.
    Status: Denied

''Hello I am here to sell some of my family's old jewel to the a local pawn shop. You happen to know where that is?'' I ask the gentleman while showing some old clocks. ''Yes just heads down the road and you shall find MR. Reds old pawn shop''. He reasoned. ''thank you so much and have a lovely day'' I say while walking off towards the pawn shop.

Character Name: fqils
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: I wear pumpkin makeup as well as black clothes although I do something change
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time, here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
  • Your Character Biography states that "I was now a citizen of Sutica." However, Sutica is no longer a nation and has been replaced by Savoy.
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, simply respond to their first words!
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @FionnTWG#3845, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite:

Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help:

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