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FREDDYASSASSINS

By FREDDYASSASSINS

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: FREDDYASSASSINS#0975
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when a person just instantly knows something or about someone.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: powergaming is when someone acts op and Just one hits everything or everyoner
    Status: Denied

On the day i was born my parents took good care of me till i was five. As soon i turned five my parents started making me do most of the farm work. fast forward a few years    the village i lived in was attacked by dark elves i thought i was lucky that day my parents sent me out to hunt for dinner. by the time i got there the entire village was destroyed. A week after that i was hunting for myself an i ran into a pack of wolves i thought i was about to die but the took me in i learned their ways how to move stealthy like and became athletic from hunting with them for so long. move forward to when i turn 17 i decided to see the world so i made myself come clothes and went to the nearest village to sell some food for coins. after that i went back and said goodbye to the pack then went on my way. 2 years later i found this city and that's where my story continues.

Character Name: Shock wolford
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: My character has black hair, grey eyes, wars red and black clothes, height is 6ft 3, strong, athletic, stealthy, weighs 160 lbs.
Roleplay Scenario:

Hello sir, can you give me a tour around here i would like to see every inch of this place.

 

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AnimeWolf0080

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why

To many Errors

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • You can not be the soul survivor of a village massacre, this falls under common characters tropes please read here!
  1. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193362-character-tropes-guide/
  • Due to server lore and rules you can’t be raised by wolfs (however I respect the dip)
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
  2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
  3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  1. https://app.grammarly.com/

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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