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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Say I knew a plot secret OOC, and it would help my character. Metagaming is pretending like my character knows that IC.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is saying I do this, instead of I try to do this. For example, I chop of your head, instead of I swing my sword at your head.
    Status: Denied

I was a goblin who was hired by a crime boss to steal a jewel, however,  I was stealing from a nobleman who liked to have about twelve flesh worms as his guards, and things didn’t go very well for me. The law enforcement was summoned, I was nearly captured, and I had a succsesion of failed heists over the years. Now, I have broken out of jail and stolen my teddy bear back from the guard room, and have returned to life on the lam. 


Character Name: Lileard
Character Race: Goblin
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: A tribal goblin
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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Ø  You cannot use lore, places, powers or religions from lore outside of what exists on LOTC. Please refer to our wiki and use current server lore.

Ø  Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are correct in essence, however they are very vague and lacking in detail. Please add more to these (Maybe examples too), and refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarise)

Ø  /msg is an OOC chat channel. This means that roleplay is not done through this, and therefore your character could not ‘speak’ through /msg.

Ø  Your character’s appearance and skin does not fit the lore for dark elves, please change this.

Ø  Please add more detail to your three interesting facts, and try not to make them simply personality traits

 

Your application was good, but there were just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivory#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /atreq on the server if you require assistance from any of us application team members!


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You’ve used some very modern ideas- ‘police’ as such did not exist in medieval times.

You’re lacking the one required lore reference- this could be a city name, world event or similar from our LOTC lore.

Flesh Worms do not exist in LOTC

Your character description should detail the physical appearance of your character, in accordance to your skin

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