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    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: ask if somethings ok to another player
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: you can ruin the rp because you know stuff you shouldent
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


ok well i was sent here by my mother because she said i was wasting my time on magic and ill never join the elven army and sent me here to work now tell me about you


Character Name: jack
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: buff eye color red green hood brown pants reddish brown 8 feet weight 145 pounds white eye
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Your application has been set to Pending for now, as we found some areas that need revising.

Don’t worry though - once your changes are made, you’ll be back on track to roleplaying with us in no time.

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

- Your Metagaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

- Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked. High Elves are unable to have Red Eyes or Brown Hair. I would suggest changing your character to a Wood Elf / Dark Elf mix due to their hair and eye colour. High Elves also can only be a maximum of 6'6 feet tall. Please refer to our Core Race Master Thread to learn more about racial traits!

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199091-core-race-lore-masterthread/

 

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences. If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic. You can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me.


- Please remember to include backstory in the Backstory & Roleplay Scenario, even if your persona doesn’t verbally talk about it.

 

- Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks.

 

- Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario.

 

- When talking about your character’s actions, remember to use 3rd person.

 

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race. If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll help you, or take a look at our skin archive:

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

- Please fix your grammar, spelling, & punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

https://app.grammarly.com/

 

You have 48 hours to make these changes.

Once your changes are complete, please reach out to me on the forums @Amayonnaise. You can also click on my name here to find my profile.

 

 If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance:

Discord

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions, or to receive help from other players with your pending application.

 

If you need more ideas, or to research more roleplay lore, feel free to check out the Wiki:

Wiki

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub:

New Player Hub

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied. Your 48 hour editing period has passed. However, you are more than welcome to immediately reapply, just remember to edit and change everything listed below:

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

- Your Metagaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

- Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked. High Elves are unable to have Red Eyes or Brown Hair. I would suggest changing your character to a Wood Elf / Dark Elf mix due to their hair and eye colour. High Elves also can only be a maximum of 6'6 feet tall. Please refer to our Core Race Master Thread to learn more about racial traits!

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199091-core-race-lore-masterthread/

 

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences. If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic. You can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me.


- Please remember to include backstory in the Backstory & Roleplay Scenario, even if your persona doesn’t verbally talk about it.

 

- Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks.

 

- Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario.

 

- When talking about your character’s actions, remember to use 3rd person.

 

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race. If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll help you, or take a look at our skin archive:

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

- Please fix your grammar, spelling, & punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

https://app.grammarly.com/

 

If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance: 

Discord 

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub: 

New Player Hub 

 

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