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Gamer147GB

the masked gamer

By the masked gamer

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Gamer147GB#0758
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: i think is bad?? the wikie sead somthing about choping someones haed of which i think is wrrong
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: i think every thing shuld be fair
    Status: Denied

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Character Name: Gamer
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: a ruthles warier whith a hoby to help hif frends the black smiths
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Roleplay Definition is incorrect.
  • Your Character Name is not appropriate for LotC. Please change it!
  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.
  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.
  • Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action.
  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [gavyn#4574]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message __Gavyn to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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