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ghoster333
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: darkghoster
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: i try to explain that person how it in long run ruin fun of roleplay
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it kinda ruin payoff of character journey, but sometimes someone can do some mistakes if they by mistake say something too much
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


*strong smell stunned little men in doors he made loud breathing noise just for show* slowly he put his oversized pouch on table ignoring siting place, looking for rest of water to chill his overheat body cause of all that thick swampy air, doing that he replay*
-old hagy, i cant told you my entire story or we both end up like a dry pums, but i can told ya that im traveling because nothing is waiting for me back where i came, just some bridge trolls eating stew from my granny *he spray water on his hiding under beard like a goblin in bush face* and im great cook if u want to eat some burnt frogy legs i got geting here miss, and i can told ya some stories of weird dwarf scrumping apples of orchard from all around world
 


Character Name: Lukli Gurbasz
Character Race: Forest Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 39
Physical Description: Short, Hairly, grumpy looking ball, with crumbs of food hide under beard, but with strong green eyes watching under curly hairls, plumpy but not fat
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

- Please add some more depth to your metagaming and powergaming descriptions!

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.

- Please submit the raw skin file as opposed to a screenshot of the skin please!

- Please fix your grammar, spelling, & punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.
https://app.grammarly.com/

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is simpleglitchbro! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

(See reasons above from Pending)

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is simpleglitchbro! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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