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    • Rules: No
    Referral: Other website
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Pretty interesting.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Fantasy is amazing.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

"Im looking for new air, a home, and happiness. Thanks for asking, thats nice from you, sir."

Character Name: Ghost.
Character Race: Forest Dwarf
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: dark brown short messy hair, messy bangs kinda covering forhead and eyes, dark brown eyes, pale skin, thin, red/black woodcutter attire.
Screenshot of Skin:
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to not reading the rules, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • You must read and agree with the Server Rules in order to play on the server! Take a look at this link to review them!
  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a too short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include whether or not you've roleplayed before!
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality. 
  • Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!
  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race, as it is far too pale for a forest dwarf. Please fix this accordingly! Take a look at the wiki page of Forest Dwarves for more information!


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @camocat9#9373, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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