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GingerRijst
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: GingerRice#0646
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: First say they need to be realistic and if they dont do it report them
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: If you roleplay you need to forget everything you know in jump into your character.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Engifer and his younger brother Hrísgrjón went on a hunt for food with a hunting crew when they got ambushed by elves . The Uruks got slaughterd by the Elves but Engifer and Hrísgrjón got away. They got lost and lived in the woods for 2 weeks. One day  Hrísgrjón got hurt in a hunting accident. Engifer ran thru the woods with his brother in his hands for days. They got to a lonely house were humans lived. A man saw them and he was scared but he saw that Hrísgrjón was hurt and he tried to save him. Engifer saw that humans are good people. He got respect for them. They stayed there for a couple of days but then Hrísgrjón passed away. Engifer left the human the next day. He found the Orcs base back but it wasnt the same. He left the Orc base and became a lone wolff. He hates elves and has respect for humans. 


Character Name: Engifer
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Uruk-hai , Black hair , brown eyes , 80KG , Musculair
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
Metagaming & Powergaming - Lord of the Craft

Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action.

Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
Skin Archive - Lord of the Craft


You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

 

Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message AllegoryRose.

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ Neviah#1516

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the Wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

 

You have not made the changes above except for adding length to your Roleplay Scenario Response! Please make sure it is in the third person and includes one action and one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks!
 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!


Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message AllegoryRose

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ Neviah#1516

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the Wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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