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Ilrih Phanzo

By Ilrih Phanzo

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: GladiatorX42 #7237
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Information you get out of a character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Controlling someone else's character using cheats or exploits.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

"I'm just passing through old man my business is none of your concern." he says with one hand on a large dagger on his hip signifying that he doesn't want to continue the conversation.

Character Name: Ilrih Phanzo
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Grey skin, Long white hair draped over one eye, Crimson eyes, 160 lbs, 6 ft tall.
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audyush

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! You have one right now, so you only need one more! 

  • Your Character Biography states that your character was born from a royal family, your character's father was a prince, and your character's grandfather was the king. This must be changed as your biography cannot claim your character to be royalty/nobility/notable/well-known. Please fix this! 

  • Your response to "What is your character's biggest fear? What caused them to develop this fear?" must be changed. There are no giants as part of the current lore of the server, please fix this! 

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

 

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message audyush! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at audyush#7358

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

 

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audyush

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below ♥

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ audyush#7358 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message audyush to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

♥

 

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