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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is being out of character. Exemple: A person does not role play the character they created correctly, instead, plays the character out of it's own lore.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is doing over powered, or unfair, or unrealistic actions. Here is an exemple: a dwarf wins a fight against a giant, because it was born with super dooper omega strength of doom or something. Another exemple: A regular human was able to ignore all magic of a powerfall wizard/witch beacuase there ancestors were imune to magic.
    Status: Denied

I would respond: Im here for adventure, and freedom.

Character Name: Nicholas Oakling
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Im almost 2 meters tall. And i weight 90kg.
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As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

 

Character Biography

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 
     

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits. 
     

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action. 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message MaltaMoss

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ MaltaMoss#1647

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

 

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above. 


 

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