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GoatWado

By GoatWado

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Breaking the fourthwall during a game. Using knowledge that your character should not know.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It is assuming that whatever is attempted instantly goes through.
    Status: Denied
Character Name: BOB
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: A 5ft tall man, very muscular, very scarred and rugged. White hair, and a long beard. Hefty, and meaty arms, weighs about 250 lb's. Purple eyes.
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SoulReapingWolf

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

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For the following reasons,

  • Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are good but could use some more work. I suggest adding examples to prove your understanding of the concept. The following links could prove useful in this task.
  • Your biography is good but it needs some work, for example, due to your age and the mention of holm there is a time incongruency in your app, you could not be alive during the time of that city with the age you mention in your application. Also, Bjor Cottonwood is not the king of forest dwarfs, he is a high chief of the forest dwarf village. Also please avoid killing sprees in your app. Make sure you replace them, the following links will prove useful.
  • You have written down that you are a dwarf, please choose a subrace as they are very different.
  • Your description could use some expansion, please make sure you describe the character the same way you picture him in your head.
  • Your interesting facts could use complete sentences
  • Your skin does not fit your character’s description please fix this, the following link can help you out to get a skin!

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

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SoulReapingWolf

I am sorry to be the one to tell you this but your application was unfortunately

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But don’t give up just yet, you can make another immediately!

Please make sure in your next application you take into account the comments I made for this one.

On 4/3/2019 at 9:49 PM, Idlesoul said:
  • Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are good but could use some more work. I suggest adding examples to prove your understanding of the concept. The following links could prove useful in this task.
  • Your biography is good but it needs some work, for example, due to your age and the mention of holm there is a time incongruency in your app, you could not be alive during the time of that city with the age you mention in your application. Also, Bjor Cottonwood is not the king of forest dwarfs, he is a high chief of the forest dwarf village. Also please avoid killing sprees in your app. Make sure you replace them, the following links will prove useful.
  • You have written down that you are a dwarf, please choose a subrace as they are very different.
  • Your description could use some expansion, please make sure you describe the character the same way you picture him in your head.
  • Your interesting facts could use complete sentences
  • Your skin does not fit your character’s description please fix this, the following link can help you out to get a skin!

Make sure you add the corrections I said on my previous comment before you post another application.

If you have any doubts, please don’t hesitate to contact me through a message in the forums or via the New Player Discord.

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