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GoldenTwilight

By GoldenTwilight

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    Discord: GoldenTwilight#1692
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Having your character know a skill they wouldn't have or saying something they wouldn't possibly know
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Making your character unreasonably strong or doing unreasonably powerful things
    Status: Denied

As I step off the boat a man approaches me and gives me a polite welcome and asks me what brings me here. 

I return his smile and say “I shall seek my fortune friend, but as of now I seek ale!”

He laughs and points me to the nearest Tavern where I head off to Immediately. 

Character Name: Yongo Crown
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Yongo is 4'7 and 200lbs, he has blonde hair and a long beard of the same color and his eyes are black. His attire is minimal with black and orange
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LotsOfMuffins

 

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your Character Biography must be at least ten sentences long. 
  • Your Physical Description and Skin do not match your character’s race; mountain dwarves do not have blonde hair. 
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standard; take a look at our Skin Archive for reference and feel free to use one of them. 
  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they aren’t quite there. Please look at our Wiki for reference, but do not plagiarize. I recommend using examples to ensure you fully understand!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short; it must be at least four sentences long. 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Guide as well.

 

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LotsOfMuffins

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to your 24 hours being up, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Character Biography must be at least ten sentences long. 
  • Your Physical Description and Skin do not match your character’s race; mountain dwarves do not have blonde hair. 
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standard; take a look at our Skin Archive for reference and feel free to use one of them. 
  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they aren’t quite there. Please look at our Wiki for reference, but do not plagiarize. I recommend using examples to ensure you fully understand!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short; it must be at least four sentences long. 


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/.

 

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