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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: gonar#2149
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: when ur in character and using out of character knowledge while in character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: when you force the outcome of your action on someone without giving them any opportunity to react.
    Status: Denied

Pablo sneered at the well-dressed gentleman as he stepped onto the wharf. He creeped around to the side of the man, carefully inspecting his ears. "No dagger-ears. That'll do." He grinned warily, yanking his baggage along. "I'll need no help regardless, thank you very much." The man sauntered along the bazaar, sampling spices, and giving all the elven vendors a wide berth and a mean look. 

Character Name: Pablo
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Pablo dresses in a worn sand-color coat, a gauntlet on his left arm. His eyes are of the same brown-ish beige hue as his coat, and black hair surround
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Josef_Rippelberg

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

 

- Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, simply respond to their first words!

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. When you are done correcting, please contact me!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Hmmm#4176]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message J0s3f_R1pp3lb3rg to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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Josef_Rippelberg

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

- failed to do the changes in time
 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Hmmm#4176]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message J0s3f_R1pp3lb3rg to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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